Perfect People are Boring
By
Beth Cornelison
Think about the books on your keeper shelf. What was it
about those novels that endeared the stories to you and
gave them keeper status? More than likely what stayed
with you from those books was the characters.
I'll bet you my lunch money those characters started
their journey as flawed individuals with enough
sympathetic traits that you rooted for them despite
their faults. Flawed doesn't mean your hero must be
dark, tortured and riddled with angst. Nor does it mean
you heroine has to be a sharp-tongued witch or too
stupid to live. Balance, as with everything in life, is
the key. Give your character traits the reader can love
(Things like courage, compassion, & a sense of humor)
along with some trait that will be a stumbling block to
the character in reaching their goal (Think fear of
commitment, self-doubt, workaholic, etc.).
Why?
Because perfect people are boring!! Perfect people with
perfect lives have no conflict, and conflict is the fuel
that drives your story. Perfect people are already at
their zenith and have nowhere to go. Why do you read a
book if not to follow a character on a journey of growth
and discovery? Readers want to see characters struggle,
learn and earn the right to a happy ending. A flawed
character who must overcome their faults, who must learn
to change and face their fears is far more interesting
(and realistic). Make your workaholic re-examine his
priorities and learn that balance, sharing his life with
his family, or leaving his job for a life of adventure
is the way he'll find true happiness.
Once
you've decided what your character's flaws will be, show
the audience these flaws by putting your character in
situations, crises, and relationships that force the
character to make choices. Push your character into
corners and make them battle their way out. How your
character acts in difficult circumstances or when faced
with change shows the reader who that character is, what
they're made of. Challenge the character's self-concept.
Give your character reasons to break out of the box he's
lived in to that point and push the boundaries. What
will your character do when face with choosing between a
business meeting with an important client and being at
his recently-orphaned nephew's championship baseball
game? Let your character flounder and make bad choices
sometimes and have to suffer the consequences. Isn't
that how real life lessons are learned? Through a series
of setbacks and small gains, your flawed character will
grow and learn and be a different (and better!) person
by the end of the story.
Now
that your character has changed, force him to make a
sacrifice in order to prove they've learned, grown and
earned their happily ever after. This sacrifice can be
giving up a preconceived notion, a bad habit, a grudge
that has hindered them since page one. The sacrifice can
be big if it fits the story– they can risk their life to
save someone, give up a job or a lifestyle or a
cherished possession– but make it personal and relevant
to this character's conflict and growth. In the last
pages, give your character their just reward. Be it
happiness, true love, fame or fortune, they've earned
their happily ever after! |